'For as long as he could remember, though it was not very long, the boy had wanted a mask.'
Epic is a matter of context, take any epic line out of context and it's not epic anymore.
I FORGOT. Did you notice any embarassing mistakes? Or can I post it in the threa?
Oh, I just kinda sped-read it.
You need to get msn or something so I can batter you with questions.:P
(whiny voice) But I'm distracted by the interwebs!
And yeah, chapter three is half done. Writing a chapter three is a first for me. Seriously.
It's better than I've ever done

I write detailed plans for my stories and never actually get around to writting them.