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Cognisant

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Okay ladies and gentlemen (and you, you know who you are) we're going to tell ourselves a story, well make a story, screw linearity we're just going to little bits here and there until it all comes together to make some kind of sense, I hope.

Everything that is posted becomes true and cannot be changed, for example let's say in my first post I say the protagonist has black hair, thereafter details can be added, such as length or that there are bright orange highlights, but the original fact that the protagonists hair is black remains true, so every contribution adds to the overall work, there will be no overwriting or editing.

You can however shed old facts in a new light, for example one person says a certain character aspires to become a great dancer, then another adds "because a good solider has to be nimble and strong" , then another adds "so he can face his crippling fear of chickens", and so forth, as long as new facts don't directly contradict old one's it's all good, juxtaposition creates depth.

Finally you must restrict you contribution to ten words, per post, you can post as many times as you like but no double posting! Your contribution can be about anything related to the story, including theme, setting, plot, scenes, relationships between characters, but it may be best to get some momentum going with the small stuff before we start on the big story defining stuff.

Ignore all my examples, we start from a blank slate, GO!
 

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It wasn't that she sought it out, it just was
 

Cognisant

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(Missquote: your syntax makes my brain hurt, I'm going to assume the third "it" was a "she")

(HDINTP: "though but" are you people trying to give me a headache?)

Her name was Mellony and she was a talented artist.
 

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She liked to paint light bulbs, so that they looked
 

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She had a color for each -- coral, for Tommy Dreck;
 

Cognisant

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There were strange, otherworldly compulsions in the back of her brain; forcing her to take up strange hobbies like light bulb painting and other inadequately described 'naughty' things.
Ten words please.

She liked to paint light bulbs, so that they looked
You'll have to complete that sentence yourself, relying on someone else to do it restricts their creative freedom.

Everyone please stick to statements, we're designing a story, not writing it from start to finish.
My bad, should have explained that better at the start.
 

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Maybe twenty words would be more appropriate then, if you need to actually complete your own sentences; ten words or less in a sentence creates a pretty choppy story.
 

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But restriction is precisely the point of it, for example I've forgotten what it's called but the Romans did it, a picture made of lots of little bits of tile all pasted together, that's what I'm going for here, I don't want any one person really thinking about what they're doing, I want a story to emerge out of chaos.

Her name was Mellony and she was a talented artist.
This is a piece of a picture, just a piece, I want people to keep adding little pieces until we've got a huge picture, then we can explain the hows and whys that will shape this picture into a narrative.

*sigh* I don't think this is going to work.
 

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Aaaaargh I don't know how to explain this!

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Okay I've got an idea, say we were drawing a bitmap image one bit at a time, not in any sequential order, just randomly adding bits to a grid in random places, random coloured bits, at first it's totally random but as more bits are added a pattern may emerge and upon seeing that pattern people will mess with it or go with it until more complex patterns form, eventually (in theory) we end up with a picture that no one of us can claim to have envisioned.

I want to do that with a story, there's so many inane details in story, we could just pick those details at random and it wouldn't really matter, e.g. Blonde, green eyes, male, short, likes tea and running around, is afraid of falling into the sky, wears green overalls and walks with a stick despite being only twelve years old. Behold a unique character made from random parts, well not really random, I can't do true random by myself but if we all picked parts separately with no communication of intent then the result would be random.
 

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But restriction is precisely the point of it, for example I've forgotten what it's called but the Romans did it, a picture made of lots of little bits of tile all pasted together, that's what I'm going for here, I don't want any one person really thinking about what they're doing, I want a story to emerge out of chaos.

But that is how people end up writing IT three times in one sentence.
 

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It sounds like you wish to create a character, not a story?

This could be fun, but I really agree that ten words is too few. Perhaps thirteen or fifteen would make it easier. Ten words leaves barely any room for complete, coherent and attractive sentences that include both adjectives and verbs.
 

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I'd agree with making the sentences just a little more than 10 words, but I would keep the rule where you have to finish your own sentence's.
 

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Yo, enough talk and more execution. You wont know how good something is until you've extensively tested it. If the rules of this game fails in this thread, then simply create a new one with your rules. 10-15 words? Doesnt even matter. I mean, It's just a guide, right? A chaotic narrative awaits.

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Then she arrived at a sudden conclusion, someone or something is writing sbout her.
 

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She got in one little fight and her mom got scared and said "you're movin' with your auntie and uncle in Bel Air".
 

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(nice, like an exquisite corpse or something)

The beer was fresh and had a dice in the logo; if anything she could say that this beer was rare.
 

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She was tired of being sold, being told, being cold...

(10 words, still?)
 

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Tommy gave her a light bulb he'd stolen from the restrooms.
 

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She smashed it, and made a mobile from the shards.
 

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Thus, when she tried to phone the psychiatric institution her left ear haemorrhaged.
 

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Her accident left her deaf in one ear, but she had never been interested in what people said anyway.
 

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Plus she had perfect pitch.
 

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She then evoked the essence of Baphomet by killing Spongebob.
 

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Spongebob's body instantly incinerated as she sang "Veni Huc Baphomet".
 
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