Song made by INTP (you won't regret)

[Inresis]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lrJL9exLchU&context=C3c45d5eADOEgsToPDskKpOQAzjbClbdZfPg81J_5j

Comments appreciated (really, please tell me what you think, I need some feedback if I want to get better, thank you), I hope you like it, enjoy.

:smiley_emoticons_mr

 

[Inresis]

Song made by INTP (beautiful, relaxing)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lrJL9exLchU&context=C3c45d5eADOEgsToPDskKpOQAzjbClbdZfPg81J_5j

Music and pictures by me, I would be greatful for some comments. I need a feedback if I want to improve. I hope you like the song, enjoy.

 

[Fukyo]

Do not make multiple threads to post a single video. Post any songs of yours you want evaluated in this thread.

 

[Inresis]

Do not make multiple threads to post a single video. Post any songs of yours you want evaluated in this thread.

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I'm sorry, I'm new in here, i thought the first post just dissapeared, I didn't realizrd you moved it in music category

 

[Pizzabeak]

Um, it was relatively nice. Chill. I don't know how to get everyone to listen to it though, people are busy.

Also, anyone think it's funny that he's wearing a red shirt in the video?

 

[Meer]

Yeah, it's pretty good.

The flute arpeggio thing on the right side in the beginning sounded a little 'General Midi', if you know what I mean, i.e., artificial and fake. The drums are kind of muffled and lo-fi, compared to the rest of it. It seems like they should be brighter. The balance between the pads, the bass and the snare seems a little off to me, but that's just me. Like, the pads and bass are pretty far up front while the snare is kind of buried. It's probably just me.

Beginning at around 1:40, there are little bits and pieces that sound like they're out of key or something, it's a little jarring. Like the guy's voice kind of wavers outside of what everything else is doing. The female voice, or whatever that is on the left around there, is great. The crash at the end didn't really seem necessary.

Yeah, I don't really know what to say, I mean, I don't really know where you want to go with your music. It wasn't anywhere near being bad, but nothing really totally grabbed me. But not all music needs to grab people, you know? It kind of reminds me of my own music.

So, nice, and keep on doing stuff and you'll improve.

 

[Affinity]

Sounds good though I didn't particularly find it interesting. I think the percussion could use more presence EQ wise and some percussive variations would definitely work nicely for that trip-hop feel. The bassline needs more mid-range IMO, perhaps another layer should do the trick. When I listen to this track, the high-end is there, the low-end is there, the lower-midrange is just a bit lacking.

Also try some reverb or delay on your crashes.

 

[Zadigdigs]

Really pleasant, and not like 's' music (tell me you know what I mean...). Very 'in contrasts', like I like..ahah. It maybe could have been a little better witout some electric effets (at my view) (fake voices...?). But it's good. Go on. More. If you replace some sounds by real piano and violin (samples?), I marry you.

 

[The Gopher]

I like it, Not sure exactly but I just realised I had it playing and it actually finished a first for most songs.