I noticed you're looking for patreon financing. I think i've got some relevant criticism.
1. Personally i think your message is lucid and important. However, i also think it's a bit too abstract for the target audience.
2. Personally (again) i like your way of speaking. However, i also think you could use a more confident, assertive and factual tone in order to cater to the target audience.
Take someone like Sargon of Akkad. I think his thoughts are coming from a similar place as yours, but he is less abstract, conceptually succinct and self-challenging - instead more inclined to point out particular instances of stupidity, more gut-trusting and more concrete-visionary. In short, he does it the Ni-Te way. He doesn't demand a unifying universal logic of himself. He just demands that he's more right than them, and he makes sure thus is the case. Then his ego is pleased. What could be learned is to attach your musings to something concrete, to use a manuscript and rehearse it, and perhaps to invest some subtle emotion in your delivery.
It could also be the case that Sargon of Akkad is successful precisely because he doesn't bother trying to explain and justify the meta-political views, instead trusting his audience to be sympathetic. This means his videos are more of an emotional indulgence (entertainment) than a core learning site, but also more of a "journalism" than an "essayism".
I hope this is helpful in some way.
