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What is a story?
A retelling of events, either real or imagined.
This is important to understand because it illustrates the importance of events to a story, in other words there is no story if no events occur, so when a writer takes an aside to describe something they're putting the story on hold to contextualize what's happening. So if a writer takes the time to describe something and that something doesn't contextualize what's happening in the story we need to ask ourselves, is what's being described really part of the story?
J. R. R. Tolkien was infamous for this, now granted his world building has become the de facto basis of the modern fantasy genre, but if you try to read his collated works on the Lord of The Rings in a version that hasn't been heavily edited for brevity it can be quite a chore.
There's also the matter of Ernest Hemingway's shortest story "For Sale: Baby shoes, never worn." but I think this is the exception that proves the rule because it works by implying events and it is these implications that are the actual story, even if the details are left up to the reader to speculate upon.
What makes a story entertaining?
At its most fundamental I believe the reason people read (or otherwise consume) stories is to partake of the experience, for example a list of events would by the strictest definition be a story however it would be a story deprived of everything that makes a story worth reading. Although it's worth noting that this is a great way to craft a story, start with a series of events (it's recommended to start at the conclusion and work your way backwards), then elaborating upon and contextualizing those events is the telling of the story
All this being said just because a story is an experience doesn't necessarily make it a desirable experience, in my experience when a story is unpleasant it's because it's not giving me the experience that I expected/wanted and is quite often the case such stories may appeal to someone else. For example were I to pickup Twilight expecting a violent dark horror/thriller fantasy about a girl unfortunately caught in the crossfire in a war between werewolves and vampires, I would probably be very disappointed. Likewise someone reading Sophie's Choice expecting a will-they-won't-they slice of life romantic comedy is likely going to be somewhat traumatized.
When trying to decide upon the appeal of a story you're writing the conventional wisdom is to either write something that appeals to you or to someone you know well, or undertake a critical analysis of a genre of fiction that doesn't appeal to you and try to ascertain why it appeals to someone else. The latter method is ill-advised however potentially the most rewarding as having an outsider's perspective on a genre can give you a degree objectivity that a fan of the genre would lack; the lack of such detachment is why fan fiction tends to have such a voracious appetite for sucking ass.
Coming soon because screw you it's 2am and I'm tired,
Why does a story have a beginning,?
Why does a story have a middle?
Why does a story have an end?
AND MORE! maybe
A retelling of events, either real or imagined.
This is important to understand because it illustrates the importance of events to a story, in other words there is no story if no events occur, so when a writer takes an aside to describe something they're putting the story on hold to contextualize what's happening. So if a writer takes the time to describe something and that something doesn't contextualize what's happening in the story we need to ask ourselves, is what's being described really part of the story?
J. R. R. Tolkien was infamous for this, now granted his world building has become the de facto basis of the modern fantasy genre, but if you try to read his collated works on the Lord of The Rings in a version that hasn't been heavily edited for brevity it can be quite a chore.
There's also the matter of Ernest Hemingway's shortest story "For Sale: Baby shoes, never worn." but I think this is the exception that proves the rule because it works by implying events and it is these implications that are the actual story, even if the details are left up to the reader to speculate upon.
What makes a story entertaining?
At its most fundamental I believe the reason people read (or otherwise consume) stories is to partake of the experience, for example a list of events would by the strictest definition be a story however it would be a story deprived of everything that makes a story worth reading. Although it's worth noting that this is a great way to craft a story, start with a series of events (it's recommended to start at the conclusion and work your way backwards), then elaborating upon and contextualizing those events is the telling of the story
All this being said just because a story is an experience doesn't necessarily make it a desirable experience, in my experience when a story is unpleasant it's because it's not giving me the experience that I expected/wanted and is quite often the case such stories may appeal to someone else. For example were I to pickup Twilight expecting a violent dark horror/thriller fantasy about a girl unfortunately caught in the crossfire in a war between werewolves and vampires, I would probably be very disappointed. Likewise someone reading Sophie's Choice expecting a will-they-won't-they slice of life romantic comedy is likely going to be somewhat traumatized.
When trying to decide upon the appeal of a story you're writing the conventional wisdom is to either write something that appeals to you or to someone you know well, or undertake a critical analysis of a genre of fiction that doesn't appeal to you and try to ascertain why it appeals to someone else. The latter method is ill-advised however potentially the most rewarding as having an outsider's perspective on a genre can give you a degree objectivity that a fan of the genre would lack; the lack of such detachment is why fan fiction tends to have such a voracious appetite for sucking ass.
Coming soon because screw you it's 2am and I'm tired,
Why does a story have a beginning,?
Why does a story have a middle?
Why does a story have an end?
AND MORE! maybe