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I made a page/organization for us.
http://www.facebook.com/pages/INTP-Writers-and-Artists-Association/101135073352948
http://www.facebook.com/pages/INTP-Writers-and-Artists-Association/101135073352948
Good to see that this is finally starting to get some members. Should we post things that we're working on/have already written?
Edit:
Beholder, it's interesting that you say that because most of my writing reveals nothing about myself. The ones that do are the ones that no one is allowed to see.
Just posted the first part of my short story thing. I appreciate any criticism and I'm also willing to answer any questions (unless the answer to the question gives away information that I'm not willing to give away yet).
I awake in a cold sweat. Hair matted to my forehead as I lay there in a state of terror. I put my boots on my feet, rolled a cigarette and stepped outside.
-- please, be consistent about the tense you use.I look down & see that there's blood on my hands & jeans. I don't know what I've done. All I know is that there isn't much time. I throw my cigarette to the ground & went back in for some clothes.
Sounds nice. Really. Might become something cool if we are to see the end of it.
You asked for criticism, here it goes:
-- please, be consistent about the tense you use.
The rest, with short worded sentences, looks oh so familiar.
I started a short story in 2007 (actually, it was supposed to be the start of a first chapter of a book I'll probably never finish) which looked familiar. With short sentences. And action. Really.
I'd even publish it, however I bet most people can't understand german and google translate is a nono.
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