Sounds nice. Really. Might become something cool if we are to see the end of it.
You asked for criticism, here it goes:
-- please, be consistent about the tense you use.
The rest, with short worded sentences, looks oh so familiar.
I started a short story in 2007 (actually, it was supposed...
Probably the most cool thing about my upbringing was my mother. I'd guess she's INTP, might be IXTP as well. She'd give me instructions, I'd react saying "Why" and she could always give a reason.
As opposed to most people here, I actually enjoyed school pretty much. When I was younger...
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