Ok, i have a second idea, which is far easier to make real.
What i have:
- high quality faked ak47
- dresses (finally
how much pain it takes away from my head)
what i need:
- chalk or flour or smth to draw the dead body shape
- small plastic bags to put evidence
- a cheap magnifying glass from the chinese store
- 1 fake cheap chinese store gun
I will still have to ask my sister and brother for help. Everyone is too busy. I know sucks, nerd. Have no friends whatsoever. I have another friend girl who said she could do the character but she's not available for the next 3 weeks, she has a strange face, i think she would add more oddness to the story.
The thing is this:
There has been a murder. Me dressed as a detective (typical suit) appear in the crime scene. It's like a abandoned school with some cool stairs near my place. In the ground there will be that typical painting with silk of a dead body. I will be with a lantern picking up shit and putting it in plastic bags. Typical stuff. I will see some shadow moving upstairs in the distance and i will turn my light to it. It dissapears covering itself with the wall.
Then there's a change of scene and i will be in my office, it will be a dark room with a yellow intence light and a lot of papers, proof and a lot of cigarette smoke. I will be like trying to use my brain to solve the case.
Next take will be my sister dressed as a detective but you won't be able to see her face. It's only for the sake of noticing there's a mysterious woman involved. Also dark room, yellow intence light.
Then i will return to the previous scene where i saw the shadow upstairs. This time the take will be from her side. So we will be able to see the girl and the guy but now i will be in the distance. She will make a bottle fall downstairs and she'll see how the guy reacts and starts moving slowly using the wall to cover herself.
At this point there's a severe change in the mood of the song, seems like a disconected part, like joining two different songs. They do fit extremely well but your hears have to get use to it. I'm still not sure about what to do here.
Then there's a chase without seeing each other, covering with the walls and stuff, from both perspectives.
Finally the guy see the person in the distance and starts the persecution through like some kind of wood or park or something in between. The place is quite iluminated at night so no major problem.
He will try to shoot her but fails and she escapes.
He gets pissed off and starts smoking.
Next scene will be like humoristic. He will be looking in the darkness with the lantern and she will be hiding really close to him using the tall grass. I see something like that mole game, guacamole, where u they get out of the ground and u have to hit them fast. Not like that but kind of.
Then he finally finds her and both start running again, this time the girl also takes out a gun and tries to shoot him but fails, he does the same with same results. Eventually he hit her in the leg and she falls.
When he uses his lantern he sees her face laughting and finds out the girl is the same girl on my first video. He goes crazy and kills himself. Girl draws a siluete around his dead body.
Take of the girl dancing in the horizon like in a twist and shout way, far distance.
Then you see how another guy dressed as a detective comes to scene and sees the new silhouette. She's also hidding behind a tree or something.
Not totally sure if this is the ending i want. But could work. Another possibility is me coming to the scene and seeing my own dead body. As if he realizes in that moment that it was him who was metaphorically dead all the time.
Which one u prefer the most?
Only thing i don't like about this story is that i won't be able to do the camera work for the most part. I will have to be really specific when i explain or perhaps do first a shot and show my cameraman.
The story is inspired in my exgf who was login in my facebook for like 1 month or more after we broke up and i didn't noticed until last week. I was also gossiping her contacts and talking some not so cool stuff with one friend of mine about her, she noticed and now kind of hates me.
So we are both detectives.